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JIRKS: The camera...

Sat Feb 28, 2009, 11:42 PM
Artist: amishrolf

Writer(s): amishrolf, Wamback

Characters: Jo, Rob

Inspirations: Primarily Fatal Frame, and pretty much any other japanese horror movie we've seen.

Plot:
"wha....uhh...where am I?" -Rob
Click! Flash!
Rob is blinded by some mysterious flash.
"Perfect, I think I caught your good side!" -Jo
Rob's eyes adjust, and Jo come's into focus holding a rather old camera.
"Where are we?" -Rob
"No idea...but check out this cool camera!" -Jo
Rob looks around the room. It's dark, the only light is from the moon beaming out the window. The floor is hard and is made of creeking wood. The room is obviously very old, being covered in dust and cob webs.
"How did we get here?" -Rob
"whats with all the questions? well I don't know, I just woke up, you were still asleep next to me and this camera was on the dresser." -Jo
Bang! A loud noise roars from behind the door followed by a eerie moan.
Jo and Rob look at each other freaked out.
"ummm, really loud crickets?" -Jo
"Come on, lets find our way out of here." -Rob
Rob gets the feeling back to his legs and is able to stand up, they make there way to the door and open it slowly. It screeches loud and slow. Rob pokes his head out of the door opening and takes a look down the hall. The hall is just as creepy and dark as the room.
"I hope every other room doesn't look like this" -Rob
"hurry up!" -Jo
Jo pushes Rob out the door.
"relax! this place is freaky." -Rob
Suddenly, what sounds to be foot steps make there way to Jo's ears.
"whats that?" -Jo
"It sounds like someone is coming up stairs." -Rob
At the end of the long hall appears to be a winding set of stairs. Along the hall are four doors, 2 on each side. The foot step sounds continue for a moment and then suddenly stop as if something had reach the top of the stairs. Yet there was nothing in sight.
"ummm, I don't see anything" -Rob
"I think we have watch enough movies to know this is bad" -Jo
Just then the noise of foot steps continue only this time much faster, as if something was running now. The doors along the hall burst open violently. Rob starts making a choking noise as he begins to lift off the ground.
"kahh....err...he....help..." -Rob
"what the f*ck!!!" -Jo
"idiot...gah....do...something" -Rob
"ok ok! give me a sec, no one is going to believe this, just a quick pic!" -Jo
"What!!!" -Rob
Flash!!! Rob is blinded again. The flash illuminates whatever is choking out Rob, then it screams and drops him. Rob's eyes focus.
"a...a ghost..." -Rob
Rob turns his head to look at Jo, only to find him fiddling with the camera.
The menacing spirit limps towards Rob once more.
"quick! do that again!" -Rob
"are u sure? that last one was a good pic, but I guess having extras couldn't hurt." -Jo
Jo aims the camera at Rob and the evil spirit as its hand reaches out for Rob. Flash!
"eeeeerrrraaaaahhhhhh!!!!" -Spirit
The ghost lets out a screech painful to the ears. The screech dies as the ghost falls to its knees and disperses into smoke and then nothing.
Rob is on the floor breathing hard in a panic. Jo smiles and says:
"got it!" -Jo
"Thanks..." -Rob
"No prob, lets find a computer so we can upload these on myspace." -Jo
Rob gets up and grabs the camera from Jo.
"What have we gotten ourselves into?" -Rob
A loud screams roar through the halls once again followed by the hallway doors slamming shut.

To be continued.

Note: For some reason I had Fatal Frame in mind.
amishrolf has played this game a lot more then I have so this may seem dry.
Once he adds his idea I'm sure this will be much better. I wasn't sure during the writing process whether this should be funny or scary....so I kind of combined them. Funny characters in a scary situation, otherwise we can make this one of the few times when Jo and Rob are taking things serious. We will see.

  • Listening to: something on tv
  • Reading: Sherlock
  • Watching: My cousin is watching something about dancing
  • Playing: Nothing at the moment
  • Eating: pretzels
  • Drinking: soda

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I'm not the actual artist of AmishWamback Studios, but I'm the co-writer. Never was one for drawing, but I do appreciate art. I hope JIRKS will be one of many collaborations between Me and amishrolf.

Devious Info

  • Current Residence: Oceanside
  • Interests: Movie, music, videogames.
  • Favourite movie: Too many to name.
  • Favourite band or musician: Blink 182
  • Favourite genre of music: Rock and Hip hop
  • Favourite artist: Van Gogh or Amishrolf
  • Favourite poet or writer: Poe or Doyle
  • MP3 player of choice: Wish I had an Ipod
  • Wallpaper of choice: Family pic
  • Favourite game: GTA 4
  • Favourite gaming platform: Shooter
  • Favourite cartoon character: Kana Minami
  • Personal Quote: I should be doing my HW
  • Tools of the Trade: My brain

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:icondrsucks:
hey thanks for the fave! keep rocking! :) :music:
:iconamishrolf:
im gonna go to your place tomorrow instead. just let me know when you're home and i'll just pick up the paper.

or you come here on your way home from a class.
:iconprimusjim:
Thanks for the fav on my Mythbusters illustration.

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Whether tomorrow or one hundred years.
I takes limbs and lives, and from the the wives
an equal ocean of their fallen tears.
:icong0069:
Thanks for the fave! :bow:

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=D hello Random Deviant!!! Random comment for you!

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:iconfavius:
thanx for the add!
:iconamishrolf:
hey guy, whenever you sign back on, i did some stuff on the page.

i tried to make your scripts into submissions, but they only accept HTML and PDF formats. so if you can do that, i'll show you how to submit something sometime.

also, i added some people i think you might like to your watch list. i also added some pics to your favorites. thought you might enjoy those.
:iconamishrolf:
GGGGGGGGGGG

i should, liek, help you spruce up your profile page.

cause im awesome liek that

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